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As a start it is good, but it needs to be polished. I found it was jeky, and because of that hard to follow.
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My Alts on Wyvern Narhalles - Rak Tiger - Cavies - level 22 Sihon - Stone Giant - Unguilded - level 21 LifeLine - Pixie Swords man - Unguilded - level 12 EgoMachine - Halfing Whipper - Unguilded - level 19 IC - Frost Giant - Unguilded - level 10 StaticS - Storm Giant - Unguilded - level 16 |
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keep it up, I want to see more! <!-- s --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" title="Very Happy" /><!-- s -->
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My Alts on Wyvern Narhalles - Rak Tiger - Cavies - level 22 Sihon - Stone Giant - Unguilded - level 21 LifeLine - Pixie Swords man - Unguilded - level 12 EgoMachine - Halfing Whipper - Unguilded - level 19 IC - Frost Giant - Unguilded - level 10 StaticS - Storm Giant - Unguilded - level 16 |
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Ill let you know when I get some good ones.
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My Alts on Wyvern Narhalles - Rak Tiger - Cavies - level 22 Sihon - Stone Giant - Unguilded - level 21 LifeLine - Pixie Swords man - Unguilded - level 12 EgoMachine - Halfing Whipper - Unguilded - level 19 IC - Frost Giant - Unguilded - level 10 StaticS - Storm Giant - Unguilded - level 16 |
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It was pretty good story, for spur of the moment.. You need to tell the one when Boki locked you in the bathroom for 3 hours.
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