|
Miscellaneous For anything related to Wyvern that does not fit into the other forums (this is not a place to goof off and post whatever nonsense comes to mind). |
|
Thread Tools | Display Modes |
#1
|
||||
|
||||
My first Improvised Story
hey guys, last friday at 8:30pm some people stuck around to listen to a story I made up on the spot for each line, I posted it here because some people only heard the end and were interested. I think it was horrible however it has been copy+pasted from the chat box.
You shout: Thisss isss the ssstory of Hero of Vesssimasss You [story] shout: SSSo one day In Vesssimasss, there wasss a naga named Bassshablasssha You [story] shout: It would be Bassshablasssha'sss firssst day of hydra training You [story] shout: Asss Bassshablasssha wasss training, sssomeone by the name of Bob sssaid, I will train you to become a warrior of the nagaraga clan You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha, ssstunned sssaid "Where do we ssstart?". Bob had told Bassshablasssha that they would go deep in the wildernessss of the Vesssimasss You [story] shout: Asss they headed out in the wildernessss, Bassshablasssha sssaw a whimpering Watery eye You [story] shout: Bob told Bassshablasssha not to go near it, but bassshablasssha had attacked it and killed it with hisss ssspear You [story] shout: Asss the Water Eye gave out a sssmall yelp, many Water Eye'sss came and ssstarted to attack Bassshablasssha You [story] shout: Bob ran in the fight and killed all of the Watery Eyesss, and Bassshablasssha only had a few water burnsss You [story] shout: Asss Bob took hisss ssspear out of the lassst Watery eye, he told bassshablasssha if he did sssuch a thing ever again that he would kill Bassshablasssha himssself You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha apologized to Bob, and they continued in the wildernessss You [ooc] shout: how isss the ssstory ssso far You [story] shout: Asss they went deeper in the wildernessss, they sssaw many creaturesss that were interesssting and quite intimidating, bob had been ssstruck by another naga from another clan, the rodanok clan You [story] shout: even though bob wasss in huge pain, he got hisss ssspear and plunged it into the opossssing naga'sss heart You shout: Asss bassshablasssha ran to bob, bob gave bassshablasssha hisss ssspear, which asss sssoon asss bassshablasssha touched it, had a luminousss glow You [story] shout: When bob died, bassshablasssha wasss too weak to carry bob, ssso he left him there, but told the newsss back to the town, and they were angry and horrified, asss bob wasss their 2nd ssstrongessst warrior aeroth [auction] shouts: Lightweight elven cloak of agility +10 anyone? You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha wasss then drafted to fight againssst the oppsssing clan, which we will call the aeroth clan You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha ssstarted to train for thisss war, and went in the wildernessss with hisss new ssspear to fight off sssome creaturesss You [story] shout: Tim, who wasss the ssstrongessst warrior in the nagaraga clan took bassshablasssha under hisss wing, and told him that he would help him become a great warrior You [story] shout: Tim ssshowed bassshablasssha how to ssstab, throw hisss ssspear, ussse hisss ssshield asss a weapon, and how to fend off againssst arrowsss and ssspearsss You [story] shout: After a few weeksss of hard training, Tim had told bassshablasssha to come to the naga cassstle You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha had ssshown outssstanding preformance in training, and wasss brought in to become a royal defender for the king + queen You [story] shout: The king told bassshablasssha that the sssilence of the two clansss will ssstop sssoon, and that the war will begin sssoon archaism [auction] shouts: Buying ring of fire/cold resist, amulet of free action. You [story] shout: SSSuddenly, sssoldersss from the enemy clan came to the nagaraga town and ssstarted invading You [story] shout: asss the huge war ssstarted to begin, Tim had ssshown proof of why he wasss the greatessst fighter, cutting and ssstabbing head after head after head You [story] shout: Tim however wasss worried when he sssaw that thessse were not royal sssoldiersss of the enemy clan, but civilian sssoldiersss You [story] shout: Becaussse thessse sssoldiersss had actually done good amountsss of damage to the city with untrained sssoldiersss You [story] shout: *they were untrained You [story] shout: and the amount of royal sssoldiersss left in the nagaraga clan wasss dwindling, 3 companiesss of royal guardsss from the enemy clan ssstarted to come You [story] shout: Asss bassshablasssha sssaw the sssoldiersss, he ssstarted to ssslither backwardsss You [story] shout: Tim had caught him, and told him that they mussst fight to the death You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha ssstared to sssee that hisss ssspear'sss luminousss glow wasss never more intenssse You [story] shout: he ssstarted to put himssself together and get ready for the battle You [story] shout: Tim, Bassshablasssha and the remaining nagaraga royal guardsss ssstarted to charge the huge army of the opposssing clan You [story] shout: And had ssstarted ssstabbing, piercing and impaling many of the enemy royal guardsss You [story] shout: however, no one noticed the bowmen behind the opossssing force, and asss they fired their arrowsss, one ssstruck Tim in the tail You [story] shout: Asss tim ripped the arrow from hisss tail, he continued to fight along with hisss comeradesss, but the nagaraga clan wasss finding themssselvesss falling ssstepsss away every minute aeroth shouts: And also, that quest is probably too hard for you to do at your current level. You [story] shout: And asss they found themssselvesss right near the cassstle, tim had found the opposssing clan had 1 flaw, half of the sssoldersss did not have ssshieldsss You [story] shout: asss the nagaraga clan ssstarted to take their arrowsss from their quiversss, they fire arrow after arrow at the oppsssing clan, they ssstarted to pusssh the enemy back You [story] shout: Asss one of the ssscoutsss of the enemy clan ran back to their king, they sssaid that they were losssing the raid, becaussse the main force that had all of the defensssive equipment had died, and that the 2nd force only had ssspearsss You shout: the king ordered that all of the tamed creaturesss be releasssed to attack the town owned by the nagaraga clan You [story] shout: asss the enemy sssoldiersss retreaded, bassshablasssha had a battlecry and wasss ssso happy that they had won the battle You [story] shout: But tim thought that thisss wasss odd, becaussse the remaining force could ssstill have done major damage to the city, told bassshablasssha and the remaining royal army to be ready for any sssurprisssesss You [story] shout: asss bassshablaha had laughed at that idea, he turned around to sssee a large amount of liquid ssshock dragonsss coming You [story] shout: Thessse dragonsss were one of the mossst dangerousss thingsss in the whole vesssimasss, and the only perssson that had ever killed them wasss Tim, and had lossst an eye killing one, let alone 15 or 20. You [story] shout: At thisss point, there wasss no place to run, and asss the liquidssshock dragonsss approached the town, they dessstroyed everything in their path You [story] shout: Asss tim, ssshocked of what isss happening to hisss city, charged into the army of liquidssshock dragonsss and threw hisss ssspear into one of the dragonsss eyesss, then ripping it out of the sssocket and imapled the beassst'sss heart You [story] shout: But, the dragon had ssswiped tim in the chessst, ripping in him half You [story] shout: asss Bassshablasssha sssaw the horrible happening of hisss comrade, he ran to the opposssite ssside of the wildernessss to the enemy cassstle You [story] shout: asss he killed many of the royal guardsss of the cassstle, he went inssside, and sssaw the king and queen, ssshocked at hisss arrival You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha threw hisss luminusss ssspear which piereced the king'sss heart and killed him You [story] shout: around 50 enemy royal guardsss came and threw bassshablasssha in a dungeon You [story] shout: 2 weeksss later, the royal guardsss of the enemy clan took the ssstarving and weak bassshablasssha to sssee hisss city, or the ruinsss to be exact You [story] shout: Bassshablasssha could not even find the ssstrength to cry, and asss the sssoldiersss threw him near the entrence of the dessstroyed cassstle, they killed Bassshablasssha You [story] shout: The dessstroyed ruinsss are now knowsss asss the Vesssimasss ruinsss, where naga zombiesss, mossst likely the royal guardsss of the old nagaraga clan had mossst likely been revived by the ssshock of the liquidssshock dragon, either from a bite or ssswipe You [story] shout: the enemy clan isss now known asss the vesssimasss, ,which many playersss today fight the nagasss You [story] shout: or come to sssee the city You [story] shout: The end. |
#2
|
||||
|
||||
I enjoyed this story!
Good work....please post more =) |
#3
|
||||
|
||||
Sorry for the year long post, but thanks a lot! I will definitely make more of these improv's when wyvern comes back online.
|
|
|
Similar Threads | ||||
Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
Story Time | Razen | Miscellaneous | 2 | 01-20-2009 08:02 PM |
A shot story. | Salkand | Off Topic | 2 | 04-04-2008 05:30 PM |
A story(you will be disapointed) | Fredd | Storytelling | 1 | 12-12-2006 12:59 AM |
Funny Story | Fredd | Chit-Chat | 2 | 11-10-2006 08:03 PM |
My story | lalavava | Storytelling | 7 | 02-03-2005 04:08 PM |